English Composition Writing for Primary One

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During the last Parent Teacher Meeting (PTM) before the June school holidays, Sophie’s teacher encouraged us to get her started on writing to prepare her for composition. And if you’re wondering, she’s only in Primary One.

While her school has not launched into composition writing in Primary 1, they are slowly picking up the skills for it when they do journal writing and prepare for their show and tell which is graded.

From what I hear from friends with older kids, composition writing is something that can be tougher to teach as it involves so many different aspects of writing like how to write a story that’s in line with the picture provided, how you structure a story, the use of vocabulary, if the story is coherent and how to make it a captivating and interesting read.

We all know that in order to write well, it’s important to read and well as well. Thankfully this is an area we don’t have to struggle with as Sophie is an avid reader since she was young.

READ ALSO: Primary One Diary – Resources for Chinese Oral

To help me guide Sophie in composition writing, I turned to my trusted bookshop and picked up these two Composition Writing resources for English and Chinese.

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English Composition Writing resource for Primary 1 & 2

Besides the fact that these titles were on offer (who does’t like discounts?), the content was well presented and gave a good introduction on how to get started on composition writing.

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From Unit 1, they dished out helpful tips on how students can analysis pictures since they will first be tackling picture composition. The questions are a good guide on how students can frame the story if they don’t have a clue on where to get started.

They also cover key areas like the structure of a composition with an introduction, body and conclusion so that students can organise their thoughts instead of jumping all over the place.

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Similar to how I teach Sophie to use the 5W and 1H for preparing her show and tell and oral, here questions like who is the main character and how does he feel, helps the students to picture what is happening in the picture and draw their own conclusions.

As the chapters progress, there are exercises to do with a given picture as well as helping words so that the child will not feel so lost for words.

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What I do like is the outline provided for the composition where they give a framework on what the child can write about from the place, to characters and other considerations.

I’m not big on model compositions and honestly find them quite rubbish, but at Primary One, the outline is a very helpful guide so that a child knows the kind of content that is expected.

I also like how they have simple 2, 3 liners in each section like the introduction, body and conclusion so that a child can learn how to plan the content of their story and how to expand further on it.

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In every section, there is also a vocabulary list which is pretty elementary at primary one level but nevertheless useful to help them learn the meaning of words to expand on their word bank to write better.

 

I try to make Sophie do writing practice at least once on a weekly basis. Not all of them are composition of course and some of them are journal writing and letter writing. She especially likes the latter as she looks forward to receiving a reply from me in our little mailbox that we made together.

Compared to reading, she’s a lot less enthusiastic about writing as she always tells me she doesn’t know what to write. So to make it more interesting, I do ask her to write about topics that she likes, for example, our holiday trips, her favorite classmate, what she’ll do if she can fly, etc.

I hope this review of the composition book I picked up has been useful and do let me know if you’ve any resources on composition writing to share.

 

Here are some links on Composition Writing that you may be keen too.

Do look out for Part 2 where I’ll share about the Chinese Composition Writing book from the same series.

Here are some other useful links on primary school learning that you may be keen to read too.

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Melbourne Street Art and Laneways

Whenever we visit a country, we like to explore places that are unique to that place. As a city that celebrates and embraces their street art culture, we couldn’t pass up the chance to check out Melbourne street art and laneways. Never mind that it’s not exactly the most child friendly itinerary we have in mind, after all this creative expression of art is something that we don’t get very much back home in our pristine clean city.

Armed with this street art map, we headed to Degraves Street, after our half day Puffing Billy Adventure. Now that’s a more suitable family friendly attraction and if you missed it earlier, you can read here.

Anyway back to Degraves Street, this is an iconic little laneway between Finders Street and Flinders Lane where people flock there for alfresco dining and coffee and I sure could do with a cup of coffee.

Exploring Melbourne Street Art and Laneways

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Melbourne Street Art at Flinders Court

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Sophie and her Rainbow Igloo!

These street art sure adds colour to the vibrant streets of Melbourne, where every nook and corner turns into a visual kaleidescope of creative and colourful expression by these artists. If you’re keen to discover more of these street art, Union Lane, Caledonian Lane and Hosier Lane are where you  want to head to. Alternatively, you can even join a Street Art Tour like the one from Melbourne Street Tours.

We passed by Centre Place and it’s an interesting laneway littered with many hole in the wall cafes that sells everything from sandwiches to soup to coffee, pastries and savoury delights.

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Centre Place – An Instagram worthy spot too

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Hole in the wall cafes

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We settled on Little Cupcakes along Degraves Street so that Sophie can get her sweet tooth satisfied as I settled down for a coffee. I have to admit that I would much rather sit along one of those alfresco cafe to people watch especially in the nice cool winter.

But alas winter in Melbourne turned out to be a wet affair and the rain made it impossible to sit outdoors without getting my hair wet.

At least,  we managed to get the best seat in the cafe which allowed us to peek out from the shop and slowly watch the world go by while I sipped on my coffee with these 2.

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We spotted a couple taking their wedding photo and went to check out the fuss across the street at Doughnut Time where a snaking queue formed shortly after I took this photo.

Turns out that they serve a assortment of decadent handmade doughnuts that are very popular with the locals. But at $6 each, we just had to give these sugary treats a miss.

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The very pretty Clementine that sells Victorian made produce and homewares

Accommodation in Melbourne

Since I had some questions on where we stayed, I thought I might as well add more details about it on the blog so that I can use it for my reference in future too.

We stayed at Citadines at Bourke Street, which is a service apartment in the heart of the CBD. We liked it because of it’s centralised and convenient location where the tram station (Bourke Street) is right at our door step and the train station (Parliament) is just 5 minutes away.  Food is never an issue as there are restaurants, cafes and fast food outlets at every corner we turn.

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Citadines at Bourke Street

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Studio Deluxe at Citadines

We booked the Studio Deluxe and had a queen sized bed which was comfortable for the 3 of us. While we didn’t get much of a view being on the 6th floor and faced the back of another apartment (I think), it hardly bothered us since we were out most of the time. For privacy, the living room and the bedroom are separated with a privacy screen.

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The wardrobe between the study desk and the kitchen

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The kitchen is equipped with the necessary appliances for those planning to cook their meals but that was not in my holiday plans though the microwave was handy for heating up breakfast in the morning.

The living room had a three seater couch and most of the time we laid our jackets there to air. The toilet was also a comfortable size (No bathtubs here) .

They also have facilities like the gym, a lap pool, sauna and yes complimentary WIFI too 🙂

Overall we liked the spacious rooms and had a very comfortable stay. My only complain was that I wished they had firmer pillows.

You can check out their website for more photos and reviews here.

 

This concludes Day 3 of our 9 days free and easy Melbourne trip. Hit the links below for our first 2 days and do check back for the rest of our trip.

Day 1- Queen Victoria Market and Wedding Anniversary Dinner at Rare Steakhouse Uptown

Day 2- Puffing Billy Steam Train at Belgrave

Day 4- Weekend at St Kilda and Luna Park

I’ll be sharing more about the rest of our free and easy itinerary on the blog soon.

Don’t miss our Gold Coast adventures in Australia too. You can read more about where we went here.

 

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Girl’s Bedroom Makeover with Ikea

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Before Sophie entered Primary One, we contemplated giving her bedroom a makeover as we expected her needs to change as she gets older. Eventually we decided to hold off the changes until we had a better idea of what she needed when primary school started.

Plus I think a little part of me was hoping and wishing that my little girl wouldn’t grow up so quickly. I mean how is it that she’s already in Primary School when it seems like it was just yesterday that she was a toddler.

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This was how her room looked like at the end of last year where her books were kept mainly in a 4 by 2 Kallax shelving unit from IKEA. We added 2 pink doors and 2 storage boxes as they helped to keep items like stationery, craft materials and accessories out of sight, leaving the rest open for her books.

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Melbourne for Kids-Puffing Billy

Ever since I saw Madeline shared about her Puffing Billy experience with her kids, I made a mental note of it because it looked like such a fun family activity for the family in Melbourne.

The Puffing Billy is a century-old steam train which still runs on its original mountain track. And the highlight of the train ride is where we get to dangle our legs out of the open sided carriage as it chugs through the forest and fern gullies of the Dandenong Ranges.

Getting to the Puffing Billy 
The journey there however was far from exciting as we had to take a long train ride on the metro from the Parliament station to Belgrave, that’s a whole 70 minutes of train ride just for 30 minutes on the Pufffing Billy. Yipe, that’s taking train to take the train.
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Can’t wait to take the Puffing Billy

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Car Free Sunday returns to the Civic District this June

I can’t believe that four weeks of the June School Holidays are ending this weekend. Hands up if you’re not looking forward to waking up early when next Monday comes. I know I’ll be having some massive blues on Sunday night.

But before we get there, I intend to make the best of the remaining days to take Sophie out for the next few days. We’ve planned a day for ice skating, a day for some splashing fun at the pool and on Sunday, we’ll be at the Civic District for Car Free Sunday. We missed the first few Car Free Sundays but heard good things about it from friends who went with their family.

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Good Bye Elmo!

And I guess this initiative really strikes a chord with us as we’ve made a big decision to sell our wheels whom we nicknamed Elmo to go car free this year. Though there have been a few inconveniences, our public transport system has served us well so far and we’ll like to think we’re doing our bid to save the earth and also towards our retirement dreams 🙂

Anyway, I’m especially looking forward to it as the Arts are taking center stage where there’s lots of fun activities for the whole family.Here’s what in store. (more…)

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